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8. Mannat

AUTHOR'S POV:

Advik was relieved hearing this that no one is in danger but her heart was aching for advantika, his guts were going to strong for her, her unwillingness to like someone was dead and now it has infuriated again with the uneasiness in his hearts with the same pounding sounds to make him nervous 100folds

Advik's family members entered the hospital with the elegance popping towards them, as they entered everyones attention shifted towards them, his parents eyes were shocked like saucers looking at their son, they didn't show their tendness towards him but they were happy to for him, he is changing his still heart is melting for someone but whom?? They were curious to know

A nurse asked them to complete the registration process, Adarsh started to move to complete the form process

"Adarsh, l am coming along with you" advik said in his almost red eyes looking deep to bury someone in his heart to love him, with the loneliness he felt

Tej stayed with the author members till then they went to complete the process

He went to the registration office,"Sir, what should l write ,who are you to the patient?  seems like her husband?when you came you were worried about her very much like she means the world for you" said the receptionist exagerating too much talkative and slyly taking out to information to try on her if she isn't his girlfriend or wife

Adarsh and saurav eyes become shocked more than worried after hearing his brother state

"No she isn't my wife ,please write she is my friend" said advik in his hard coughed voice which can be known he scoffed too very much internaly

"You guys go l am coming in 5 minutes" said advik leaving them with the balnk and confused face

"But where are you going advik..let us know,we can't let you go in this state men" said Adarsh concerned for him

"I am not a child Adarsh, you are asking me every small detail,l am in well state and l can control myself" said Advik rudely and turned to another direction with the paleness spreading his body

" fine , bro relax everything will go smoothly " said saurav to cool down the tense surrounding

Without replying he left

Adarsh and saurav went to the room where everyone were preseny

" where is advik? " asked arvind(adviks motapapa) uncle

" he didnt told us,and he went to another direction after filling the form " said Adarsh

" I came from the other direction,he is sitting in the temple at lords Krishna's feet " said saurav in a shocked way with breathing high and low cause of running.

Everyone become shocked after listing this,no one was able to digest the new information

Advik's mom and dad went to the temple hiding them behind the doors,viewing his son worshipping god.

" god, why this with me...am l done something wrong to you..or anybody..why are you giving this punishment to me....l was never so close with anybody.....after that incident l had stopped worshipping...you..god please Save her god...please..l will also give some charity to donor's...mom told me  once...when something really really important to us...you should keep...I don't know what this new feeling is called from the day l met her....l just want her to be happy and blessed..

" he was sobbing telling this...his hands were in pleading way,his tears weren't control within him...he was lost again

Suddenly

" mein Advik Nilesh Patel manta (promise) manta hu,ki agar advi thik hogae toh mein Titupati jaake waha ki sari sidhiya chadunga aur Maha arti ka chadava bhi dunga sab chote baccho ko khana bhi khilauga bas aap Advantika ko thik Kar dijye..Hamari aapse yehi prathna Hai" said advik calming down His breath, closing his eyes with the prayers he felt with the true intentions to care for someone

His parents were listening all this standing near the door now they were more curious to know who is advi they decided to give him some space in alone and went near the room

"What happen Nilesh..where is advik?" Asked arvind

"He is at the temple " said Nilesh

They all were digesting the information they were getting at every new second

Soon the cabin of the room opened again,making everyone inquisitive what's next

"Where is the husband of the patient who was making chaos here,l want to meet him first" said Dr.firmly

" tej go and call advik" said Minal advik's mother

The cousin clan mindly cupped their mouth hearing the word husband, this was very new to them

Tej went to the temple and called advik..advik came running and gasping heavily. More than this they were eyeing each other At the words of Minal, she didn't mind at all.

"Yes sir you called " said advik calmly with his paleness spread over face, which he tried to hide but failed

"Yes Mr the thing...isplease control yourself Mr..." said Dr curiously

Advik nodded in response crossing his finger

"Actually, sir ...no need to worry now.. she is out from the danger zone..she just needs some rest..."Dr said grinning with a smile captured under his mask

Advik squeeled into happiness when he heard the news, and hugged the tightly making the Doctor scoff.

" I guess you had an love marriage" Dr asked with a smiley eyes

"Ummm...Dr, l am not married,l am single" said advik

"Seriously, sir l didn't mean to but the way you made chaos was looking like she is your wife" said Dr teasingly with a shock face

Advik had tiny, tiniestttt tint of red on his cheeks

Somebody also notice that tint!! BUT WHOM???

"You can meet her later" said Dr.

Advik nodded

All he knows now was, he has to face so many question from dearest family friends...when he turned towards them...they were just shooting daggers from there eyes who is she?when did you met her??all the questions were ready to throw on the pit so he itself started telling them

"I will answer every single question of yours at home,but right now l need to call advi"s parents" l told them giving a sheepish smile which was return by giving me tease grin and vibrated upside eyebrows

"Beta but what's the full name of advi and where is she from" Asked mom

"Maa, her name is Advantika Bhavani and she is from sion she endivior's there " l said taking Surbhi's phone

When l made the call ...the call was Ringing Ringing *****

Running footsteps were heard from far away when l turned back l saw a girl and a boy in his 20s running towards me...gasping

"Sir, do you know where is advantika bhavani's room" that same boy ask me with huffing on his voice

"Yes but why what happen,how do you know her" He investigated him, to double check if they aren't the traiter cause until her parents came he is the "only person"

"She is my older sister Advantika and l and her are her siblings" he said gasping heavily

"Please tell me sir where is she" said the boy again

"She is in the room 202,she had a operation yet she is fine,she is out of the danger zone" l said keeping my hand on his shoulder, to felt him relax he signed at that but the tension on his face was visible

But soon they hasten towards the room of advi they saw her and soon the tears left from the eyes

the other people came running towards the room...soon that girl rushed towards a lady l guess her mom she was looking in her mid 50s

They are were standing at the door of advi l was going to say something to them before dad interrupted me not to do so

The same lady started sobbing down seeing advi's view from the door the man was making her calm same was going with the other family members

Doctor interrogated them...after interrogation they felt relieved..a small sign of satisfaction was been seen from the lady's face

The man in his late 50s and that same boys was walking towards me and dad...

When l examine them closely they were the same people with whom l had meeting today

"Hello Mr advik, l hope you recognized us , we had met before" said the boy

"Ofc , l am really sorry for behaving that way" l said apologizing with my little head bow down

"It's fine...but why are you here,sorry to ask but at that time..."advik said but left speechless hence for the gurl he was restless is there daughter what answer he would give them

"Actually my brother , had came to meet advantika and his 2 friend which had met with the train accident" this was said by my beloved sister vinarika

I gave glared to her l was bringing up a new excuse..but what she did...huhhh!!

"Ohh you know my daughter Mr.advik?" Asked Mr Kashyap with shocked face

"Yeah we had met through our common friend..and we four came together in train " Advik said

"How did all this happen you know advik"asked Kashyap with a frown look

Advik nodded negatively

They both nodded on the response.

Not for long time surbhi and aashish came to their senses

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