Every family member of Bhavani were looking at each other as they all knew that advi is missing they have send people to find her but no clues!!
Not to make it obvious before hand they went and met with Patels with the namaste signaling between their hands joint as first advik Nilesh and Minal entered with the family at their back had some shagun of Tilak on tye forehead entering with joy and enthusiasm
Kashyap was showing them there place to sit Advik's eyes were roaming the entire mansion for just a look of hers as the water was served he was looking here and there meanwhile Vani came and sat beside her
"I know bhaiya, you want to have glance at her have patience everyone is noticing you" Said Vani and advik's cheeks started flowing blood which turned to blush ,like anything today he was not able to consume himself he was feeling butterflies for the very first time he felt nervousness again for HER his hands posture which where calm was getting eager to look her his eyes were asking for peace which was she, he was happy everything is going smooth the feelings he was feeling was not in his control he was at the peak to broke out of happiness. For the first time he was feeling happy but he don't know how to show his happiness the words were not forming. He is eager as hell now to meet her but a unknowing feeling is disturbing him.
Cause he knows if he entered she would come to balcony to atleast look at him her aura her presence is enough to notice advik if She is present but nothing her fragrance and near him. Till then Minal ask..
"Vevan! Amari vau kya che, advik ne jovanu bauj man thaye ru" Said Minal looking at advik which he chuckled and his throat become dried the words lost his support
(Samdhan ji, where is our daughter-in-law, advik is eager to meet)
Everyone giggle looking at his face as he also didn't spoke anything he was smiling throwing his teeth out! His smile was not at his control he tried to control consumed himself but the smile eager Ness was making him out of control he finally fighting hard to himself atlast he accepted people in love smile like idiots when they didnt expected a girl came and made them change he was taking the entire attention. He bowed his head down to prevent people looking at him with this madness of love he is!
Everyone noticed him how he was feeling shy and preventing them to look at him, they where happy he was internally feeling cured and no one tried to ask him or tease they knew right now the feeling he is at let him take the nervousness at his hold. He is expearencing everything new that's why no one interupted him. But A thought still interrupting him but he ignored that not be true so let him excuse himself as he saw some of his buissness partners
"Hello Mr. Advik" said Manas hand shaking him meanwhile advik passed him a smile.
"Hello Mr. Singh, how's your boxing going on?" Asked advik with same fame topic
"Good progress" Manas said taking sip of drink
"BTW where is your fiance?" Asked Manas out of blue
Advik was well prepared untill and unless they saw advantika they will ask him the same questions
"What say! She is getting ready" said advik in his antics to act normal
If was 7 in the evening still advantika was no were seen this was making sweats high of Bhavani's and the anger of Kashyap was crossing his peak he was giving deadly glares to Kanta which she was ignoring and scared off
Advik patience got off at time as well as patels everyone started asking for advantika's presence many of them asked is everything alright or she ran off from.the wedding many rumors started as she wasn't found. The rumors which were heard by advik made him twisted his hand he trusted her but he didn't trusted her family
"Mr. Kashyap is anything wrong?" Finally asked Nilesh as he sensed something is missing and the doubt came out true when Kashyap went stunned
"Mr. Kashyap has anything happend to her?" The words slept out from advik's mouth with the lump of saliva sucking in he asked..
"Wo---actually..-- damaad ji advi has"Mr. Kashyap has anything happend to her? Advik cutted him when he was sluttering between a song popped up everyone glanced at the song coming from the sude where the pop up flies as everyone flinched
_______________________________
Advik's pov
We entered with the celebration of band bajaaa ofcours after all THE ADVIK PATEL is getting engaged atlast we entered, we were greeted by the bhavanis with Tilak on the forehead and auspicious Aarti thali.
But as entering the house my eyes were roaming only at a girl who was no where found. This was quite strange for me as l entered she would be more excited than me to look at me she would have sended someone to get some glimpse of me or something like this but turned out something else as everyone was asking for her to Mr Kashyap he was giving excuse yeah in engagement people plan surprises but at this mansion surprise was not in the Bhavani's bucket list. Looking at other people they were satisfied with his answer unlike me who was finding something has happend what l don't but something has happend
Cause Khushi khush, keertan mitali would be here now present with me or trying to tease me again only elders were present. If girls are getting ready for the past 2 hours we understand but boys are getting ready for past 2 hours and hasn't came out to check is everything fine or not this can't be coincidence
When pappa ask Mr. Kashyap
" is anything wrong Mr. Kashyap" asked dad, thank god he understood my concern and he showed his eyes as blink to relax me but it didn't work but Mr. Kashyap got stunned at Pappas words but got caught as asked
"Mr. Kashyap has anything happend to her?" I asked raising an eyebrow l new nothing gets smooth in our Journey they would have said something to her or.....
No if they did l have brought guns with me as well, l don't trust Bhavani's except their daughter!! (Precise)
Wo---actually..-- damaad ji advi has" he scutteredbat his voice which l caught l was about to say something But A song started l was so angry at that person who started the dj right now. My Fiance is not at the house and they are banging down the sound my wrist turned to look at the person but Got relaxed looking at HER
I hope you know who is she!!!!!!
She was standing back looking at me with the blackness blouse tied with the buttons her lehenga was flaring like anything more than the umbrella the small designs were matching ofcours it was made by the same designer which we customised it!
As the rhythm of the songs started as her Moves of waist and my heart started racing with her moves her looks were enough to make me "gaya" l should visit hospital today itself or else my heart would fade anytime
She turned back with the perfect flipping her hairs which were till her hips curled showing her brown highlights her hands at waist and everyone started looking at me
(my clan ofcs)
She was looking damnnn hottest from the back itself as her blouse only reached to her bo*bs covering it her which would be perfect to suck her naked waist was visible with her perfect figure yeah she is chubby but for me she is all curved with S below her navel the lahenga was tied which was giving a perfect look but l would snatch out the eyes of the people and mens present here if they tried to gawk her she is entirely mine!
(Song: kiteh rehe gaya)-author
She turned back as the song started her actions which was acting like a queen yeah sure true she is miss India her innocent expression of eyes the politeness, kindness fire love passion excitement nervousness was seen as mine and her eyes locked it felt she entirely peeked through my eyes without saying anything, it felt like my soul was made alive at just her one eye contact my hands posture reached to my mouth to hide my hues on the cheeks which was uncontrollably flowed by the blood, the mehendi she was glancing out for me the name which was shouting on her hands her expression on "mereee mahiyaa" her innocent expression would make me fly
"Ring ceremony aaj rakhwake
Band Baja dije bulake
Mahi Mera kiteh rehagaya"
She said twinkling her empty fingers looking here and there with a pouty face stomping her feet such a cute act men
She started jogging towards me l notice the eyes which was so lovable embracing more with the Kajal and eyeliner she placed not the heavy makeup but a minimalist pink blush or my blush the bindi between her forehead which made her look replesent that rosy lips which l want to suck hard at the lyrics which considered l was late ! Na.
She started encircling me
"Dil Mera senti hai
tu dil na Mera todana
Kehete hai Nain mere na Nain kisi se jodna
Mere kaan mein hai jo bali
Maine tere khatir dali"
She Said with her hands at her head with her moves standing close to me she was so close that l could hear her heartbeat racing she was nervous l caught her, at the words she gave me her catty look with her two fingers crosing over mine eyes as if l would stare any other girl than her she will kill me serve on plate will eat raw ,and her thumaks KAMAR which l loved which are pooking like a silk soft and brushy , suddenly a flinched at me l found to lost my control over legs and falled on dheer and tej who were beside me as advi hitted me with her side thumka as l fall on them
THIS IS HOW I FALL EVERY NOW AND THEN FOR HER!!
Everyone laughed at her and my antics as l lost control and l was smiling like a mad idiot my smile was not stopping anytime my cheeks started hurt but still an happy smile was covered on her face which mine smile to curve my lips She huffed suddenly looking at me when l passed her smile she uttered a sorry underbreath l gave assuring smile to her
She removed her Bali(earring) and landed on my Pams and started continouing her steps
Which l was smiling till and l guess l would be red tomatoo cause of her dance and her mischievous
"Ring ceremony aaj rakhwake
Band Baja aur dj bulake Mahi Mera kite rehgayaya"
She started again and the song came to an end with the slomo. I was so zoned out looking at her l didn't knew when her danced ended l was just looking at her, God please come and stop this time l want to look at her every day night
I was standing still with the same smile reaction on my face but words were dry as words can't describe her men, when everyone started clapping my attentions shifted to my girl when aashish nudged me at the shoulder and then l also started clapping. She came shyly with her tip toe walks for the first l saw her so shy. Everyone can glance that she was looking shy as if she is embarrassed if something or nervousness 10fold she feels that she just what to hide in my hugs and dig in my nape not to show her face!
She was standing beside me l never dance before in my life so l knewed l would beshame myself in front of media so l asked tej to played the song rhythm and pass me the mic cause singing is my pasion l am trying and have been practicing hard l hope this could work
RANJHANA - Advik's song
"Hue Charo aur shehenai shor
Tu meri aur chal nikla
Chal Prem alore dil ki chor
Meri mahourat le nikla
RANJHANA HUA MEIN TERAAA, KON TERE BIN MERA
ronake thumi se meri
Kon tere bin mera
Tera ye char jukega
Kon tere bin mera"
Hue Charo aur shehenai shor
Tu meri aur aur chal nikla
Chal Prem alore dil ki chor
Aur Meri mahourat muk dikla"
I sang this much taking breath, l was looking at her deep in her orbs is was coming out her happiness was growling today the promise l made that day came true l promised myself l won't bear lf tear escaped from her eyes I guess I am on my right path..
The words choosen for her, the emotions my eyes were speaking was more than the words I can gather up, if l found the English dictionary and the gujarati dictionary the words for her drained off seeing just her beauty her character has my another heart! Though she has occupied my first heart
(Further song please listen in the clip)
At the last lyrics l took her hand in mine bringing her at the centre making a twirl as her lehenga embrace it hard capturing my heart breaking 1000 hearts the song and the rhythm wasn't missed at the beats with the flashes thrown at us as camera mans,reporters ofcs!! Approached us
Our smiles were more intriguing each other with the accentuating heart races formed as it we want to stay still at this moment forever the fever of love was on high on me l never knew the love is so beautiful if you found the right one your smile and confident would never fade
The song ended at the words as we stopped at the tone with the room filled with smiles mingles chuckles jealous means the adorable love from families were completely seen the plauses never ended, a sigh of relief formed in our face
I sidely peeked at her, her chest was bloating high and low cause of nervousness she wasn't hype at the dance but she never liked gaining attention or to be centre stage but now as the only attention was us the heat crawled her and nervousness took place
To get her low l took her hands between my hands she looked at me with shocked as our eyes locked and speaked
"Advik, we are centre attention of everyones eyes media too" she said with her eyes
"So? Let then catch afterall I don't fake emotions" I said looking in her eyes
"But still"
"What still?, you are my to be wife's, I would like to show how much she means to me"
Everything was good but that doesn't mean my concern for her came at destination when she arrived just l relieved that she is safe I knew nothing is perfect something happend as Bhavani's face turned to relief as she entered
AUTHOR'S POV:
"Ohh as everyone can see the only couple who is getting the limelight of eyes is speaking with eyes!!! Where we can see this adorable looks with the genuine love formed with the concern smiles" Said Vani as she took hold over mic with tej and on the another sude Khush and Khushi
There attention shifted to them advik nodded dismissively at them but someone's hold over his hand tighten as they were the lime light
"Dont worry chand, I am with you"
An assured smile
"Yeah ofcs! Vinarika we can see how your brother is happy with our beloved sister" entered Khushi from the another side
(It was true l damn happy around her) advik said in mind
"Tej, they will continue the bickering behind the stage let's continue our anchoring" said Khush and tej nodded and everyone chuckled on that
"Hari om, hu ( I) Tej Nilesh Vasani" "Hu" a brief hault took place between the words of khush as he taught he need to take his dad name his gaze fall on advi was sitting beside advik assuring him with her eyes not to stress up it's okay expression everyone noticed khush's expression they were thinking he is getting emotional cause her sister is getting bid off happily but the situation was he didn't want to take name of Kashyap
He took a deep breath but not looking like mistake he tried hiding by the sentence
"I hope badha ne Khabar hase Mari Ben na lagan thaye ra toh thoduk emotional thae gyo, kay wandho ni
Hu Khush Yashoda Bhavani ane" " Hu Khushi Kashyap Bhavani, tamaro swagat Kari Ryan che" said Khushi trying to hide the open glimpse of khush
(I hope everyone knows my sister is getting married so got a bit emotional, it's okay I khush Yashoda Bhavani and l Khushi Kashyap Bhavani we welcome you all)
"Tamein be potna potna favourite parents na favourite etle vachat naam batli gyu, saru karyu ki ek ma maa nu naam and ek ma pappa nu ,haine khushi" for not bringing up more excuse Vani tried to hide which didn't got unnoticed by the families
(Both of them are favourite of their favourite parent that's why middle name is changed and it's correct for one their should mom's name and the another dad,corewct khushi)
She smiled in return advantika and advik was feeling good as they were helping each other and coping with each other
" su dance karyo bhabhi tamein shabd occha padi jase Tamara mate mara khyal ti bhai ni ta thadkan aj rukigi hase" Said vinarika entering the chat room again advik didn't felt wrong anything this was all teasingness and he loved his family
(What the dance performance bhabhi did, words couldn't describe her, according to me Advik bhai's heartbeat would have stopped)
"has toh wadi" said khush
(Ofc)
"Haan but Amara jijajiii ae pan song kitlu saru gayu, advi ni ta dhadkan jijaji na Awaaz bhegij halva madigi hase" said
Khushi in return to make favourite for his jiju
(You are right but our jijaji wasn't less, advi's heartbeat had me rythum with the jiju words and emotions)
All these took place for the next 10 to 15 minutes which made the surrounding cool down
"Mara khyal ti Haji samay na waste karta aape aapda couple ne stage mateh bolavi ne aagad no karyagram chalu kariye" said tej trying to wrap it up
(Let's not wasting much time we start with the future ceremony if further couples)
Advik forward his hand to her she smiled with the nervousness as she bit her lower lip silently grasping the centre stage when everyones eyes were popped on them as there weren't many guest but still
"Let's play a game before, l would like to call the young couples" Said Vani
"Beta can we too join" asked Mavji (adviks granpa)
Vani was stunned to reply next
"●What to say now?
● If i said yes then advik bhai will scold me?
●if not then dadaji will scold me" the question started Wrapping her head she was a soft girl with protective brothers who didn't dare to raise their voice infront of her
"Dada ji, you can play the game at sangeet, cause now we will know who knows whom better" said Khushi
Meanwhile Vani sighned with smile
Everyone nodded and than the game began,
Couples :
Advik and Advantika
Aashish and surbhi
Veer and Ahana
Keertan and mithali
Rishabh and Ruhani(cousin bhai and bhabhi of Advik)
Everyone was standing as girls behind and boys at front as if they can't see each other. Advik's and advantika heart was racing as it pumped out from the heart awaited moment were so near as it felt everything is going well. But advi was feeling a bit dizzy cause she isn't well the gun shot still sometimes pains and she hitches in pain as always she doesn't like to show her emotions
The game begins as khush and tej started to instruct them
"We will ask you some common question about your wife about her dressing the colour she wore her jumkas and some of her characteristics, are you all ready" they said yes in unison but the voice of two people were timid as they were shy their guts was felling turns and twist
"Are thoda enthusiasm dikhao yaar shaadi hai" Said Vani with her voice and everyone yelled yes in excitement
"Here goes the first question, detail about your wife's gown or saree" the question thrown at boys keertan in excitement started telling
"She has worn a saree with purple and lavender's mix colours the details of peacock with the white beats is embracing with the attention of the plates as it peacock feather" said keertan and mithali blushed as the competition got tense to win the awards everyone started peeking at their girls while keertan was standing with a huge grin in his face While mitali was shy
"Ahhhaa boys no peeking seeking, Aashish bhai your turn" said Khushi
The excitement of people starled at the peek as the game was going fun as aashish failed at the first attempt to describe her and they shook out!
The third couple ahana and veer was the most excited Chick present there
"She has worn a gown with white flower designs with pastel shades the sleeves covered with the embroidery..." a dry he continued telling this the competition started to trail more suspense as veer passed the test and atlast the 4th couple loosen as he got beaten by Ruhani because he spoke the first thing wrong about her saree
"Atlast but not the least our last and the major couple, let's find out Does Advik knows Advantika better" everyones excitement were clearly seen on the face
They knewed it isn't a war if one went wrong but need to hear her day and night
"Okayyy!! SO sheee," he was cutted as Vani spoke in between
"Tej pass the mic to bhai or else his voice won't reach us" said Vani and handled the mic to Advik and everyone chuckled at that
For the very first time the Patel family saw that Advik felt shy and started rubbing his nape of his neck and the smile was not leaving it's place, as if the owner of the house had found the correct renter
"Okayy so shee, she likes to were a very detailed dress which empazied it more and her persnality the details her dress hold cant be decribe my me the dress was not worth of her beauty. The dress also fade infront of her persnality .she has wore a purple shade of lavender dress with the half sleavess detailed with the sparking beats emboided it firmly as it shouldn't pin her , the dress has a v neck with a double line below it with an autum theme the dress uncovers her lehenga with the same authum theme with the leaflets drawn with embroidery, my words can be shorter than the dress she is wearing it is enhancing it more when her dupatta was tied when she dance" Advik said all this closing his eyes to remember how beautiful she looks with the brown complexion of Indian shade
Advi was feeling shy with the words of his, she always feel captivated by his words she really is beautiful by his eyes..when he said all this she was feeling there is some meaning hide in her existence and here's the reason where he standing at the front
He opened the eyes and was feeling confident but shy at the same time he didn't showed it but his gut was twisting with the uneasiness covered
"This is how Advik fell for her the first time" yelled aashish standing aside as everyone attention shifted to him and advik felt embarrassed sudden as his lie came out from the duvet but he thought why to hide emotions so he started gigglied at Aashish's words with looking down with red cheeks shy feeling as it felt it was a small crush on her but the feeling were genuine
"We all know who is the winner the #ADVITIKA " they fore yelled in unison
Clapping and fun was gathered, the time was already running so Wrapping up with round one they decided to go with enagement and the dinner round
"Sisters please bring the rings on the stage" khush asked Vani and Khushi to bring the rings and stand at theor particular sides they both were facing each other after a major time
ADVIK POV:
The game boosted me some gooseblumps and my stomach grumbled when they said to decribe her the words were less for her beauty to describe but when aashish said that and l felt that! I didn't accepted but time and her made me accept that l falled on her the very first day when l saw her all grumpy anger stubborn !
Now we are standing infront of each other looking into eyes as peeking to yearn and hug each other. I saw a tiny miny glimpse of redness of her cheek but it wasn't blush the other side of the cheeks was perfect was the right was abit swollen as someone hit her, as l process this thought my hands tirned but l compose as it was our engagement i dont want ruined my eyes went to look at the person who has most likely and guts to do her dad but if these is the situation she would have told me I will ask her later this could be true and false as well
The ring were brought with the slomo and relaxing music played in the background
She took out the ring and grasped looking at me as l was sitting down on one knee with the ring box open she standing at front with exasperation
She smiled l smiled too
"Chand, I don't know to speak those lines in the TV, l haven't watched those bollywod romantic movies and don't know to express myself if l did any mistake l am sorry beforehand" I Said with the signed and started the next sentence looking at her sparkly eyes
"I am grumpy arrogant person, I was stubborn at many points when you entered in my life it felt there is more stubborn person than me who listens to everyone but only shows herself infront of some major people, I don't what to say l haven't tried this type things but l really wanted to say will you share your life with me and be my better half if l took any wrong decision in anger will you help me too cope up with my anger issues" I Said this looking at her my heart felt relieved after saying this as l let go everything and she entered with every new start
"Yes, l am.willing to take all the responsibility of yours l won't mind if you are stubborn we both will fight with it, thank you for staying by my side at the most difficult times to be honest l didn't knew what the next chapter would turn and will make my heart turn alive with the thousands of new emotions and feeling I felt in my guts" she said sitting down at my level and chuckled at that
( don't know why but l am chuckling and giggling the entire fucking day men!! Cause l am in love) said the inner mind which l made it shut
We slided the rings in the each other fingers and stood up with the clapping and plauses not at the end
Everyone blessed us with the blessing of their's and fun while taking picture as my friends throwed me out and took pictures with her and l was standing with a blank expression with annoyness
"Bhabhi Teri hi haiii, bas sambhal ke rakhna nai toh dekh Lena bhai hu mein abhi bhabhi ka" said veer in boxing tone l chuckled on that and showed him thumps up
Everything came to an end atlast l ask for privacy coming near the ladies were maa and other aunts were sitting taking advi with her
Since morning l haven't talk to her and here everyone is taking and going when l am free she is busy and when she is free l am busy now l have to take a step
"Haan haan sahabzaade, go and take her along with you we wont disturb you both now" said maa looking at me and again l started rubbing my head and looked down at advi was was spying peeking looking at me and smirked when mom said and l smiled looking at her and the ladies surrounded started lauging at us
Haan haan tease us I will see you all at home* I said in mind
She stood up and her leg slept as she came out before she fall on the ladies l hold her hand and my hand snaked at her waist her eyes squeeshed in terror l smiled looking at her state the small cute terror to fall and again embarrassed herself
And still saw the redness on her cheeks but dismissed my thought looking at her
And here l go AGAIN
I AGAIN FALL FOR HER AT THIS TIME, THE FEELING IS GETTING TIGHTER AND TIGHTER
She opened her eyes and the people looked at us in aww she stood up with her cheeks red looking here and there l hold her mini hands in my large hands as it Got hidden between my hands and took her from everyone
Coming out in lawn l hugged her and she hid her head in my nape struggling it hands embraced at my waist. This hugged felt like we yearn for each other it was not a selfish but felt the presence with mattered us
She looked at me with her chin at my chest and l kissed her forehead and she signed
"The day was tough?" I asked
"Alot"
"Tired?"
"Hmm"
"Can l ask you something?"
"Yea"
"What happend at home?"
"......"
"I know something happend"
"Ah..han"
"If you are comfortable then only, I won't force you"
"Actually, dadi slapped me"
I flinched at the statement my blood started boiling as to shed litres of blood from the Bhavani! Right now l am feeling thunder inside me to vanish the existance of Bhavanis my eyes started throwing fire as if they met me, l knew something happend but slapping their own daughter out of my virtues she starled when l tried to break the hug but hugged me more tightly not leaving me
"I am tired advik by them" She signed
"Say yes chand, and they will lying under the fire and virtualiing the death rites"
"I can't, however they are they are atleast my name sake family"
"You didn't said anything when she slapped you?"
"You would laugh at me if l told you the truth"
"I won't"
"Pinky promise"
"Haa baba pinky promise"
"I am going to be the daughter-in-law of patels, don't forget that when l was admitted in the hospital how you came being tensed and the anger issues they have heard about you l add some more fire spice and kerosine both"
"Ufff chand"
She smiled and l smiled
"Can l kiss you?" Asked advi
"I went silent for a minute not able to consume myself as if it is true she is asking me to kiss her. She access me to kiss her which l promised myself l won't do anything before getting her permission and here she is comfortableeeee
She broke the hug and started going back it click me l didn't gave her answer which made her overthink thousands of questions about me thisss girrlll
She turned back l pulled her with her hand she lost her control and turned and bumped into my chest, I snaked my hand behind her waist and one at her cheeks
"You don't need to take permission I am all yours you can do anything you want"
Slowly my lips brushed on her soft rosy lipsbringing my stomach guts turned and suck my inner stomach hard for the feelings which is building up!!!Fuck her taste uffff she tastes like cherry goddd l am addicted to her lips like anything she tastes sweet and sour at the same time,she embraced her hand at my neck grabbing it. I hope she just don't hold my hair which will make me loose my control.
She pushed some more effort on the lips we weren't sucking but the restlessness and tense situation around us the kiss was so slow fruitfull l would love to fuck her after her permission I get. She tapped on my shoulder for accessing her breath as she was out of breath we broke the the kiss l joined our head with each other her chest was bloating high and low cause of unsteady breathing l smiled at her she smiled back
It was time to go back so holding each other's hands as we turned both the clan was standing with hands folded till there chest and parents at their back
I guess we got caught!!!
We looked at each other
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I am tired cause this chapter was nearly 6000 words,I don't know if you noticed but the next chapter would take some time if it finished earlier l would published
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